I've tried to leave comments on a few wordpress blogs today and yesterday, and they have not seem to register. I'm very annoyed by this.
Thoughtful comments
i
a prickling of emotion,
a finger tip dipping
a stagnant pool of memory
a glass chain linking
understanding
carefully strung into words
in response to words
ii
blind faith for words
to be delivered. is lost
because of a broken script
in empty space
iii
what I said,
I said so much
it's hard to remember
next time
I will keep it simple
just in case
I have to say it again.
iv
I liked it. I was saying (why)
I like it. and it has effect on me.
and I'll remember it.